During revision, Jorge added a topic sentence that clearly connected the paragraph to the one that had preceded it. However, he did notice that one paragraph did not have a clear main idea. For the most part, the flow of ideas was clear. As he read, he highlighted the main idea of each paragraph so he could see whether his ideas proceeded in a logical order. Jorge reread his draft paragraph by paragraph.
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